My thoughts on class speeches. - Kyron

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I’m going to tell you my thoughts on one of our classmates speech. Unfortunately I wasn’t able to see the best speakers out in the street due to me not being there at the time.

Most Appealing to you? and why?
I think Amelia's speech was the most appealing, It was about her nana that passed away. Amelia always wondered why her nana was happy at a school always cleaning toilets and classrooms , Amelia would always go and help her nana after school. It wasn't because she liked her job it was because she loved seeing her grand kids. Now Amelia knew why she was always happy.

I chose Amelia's speech because I really thought that this was touching.

Which speech was the most entertaining? Most thought provoking?.

I found that Talita's speech was the most entertaining, She gave us some tips what to do when there's a powercut with your siblings. She said their always on their phone using their data which I think is true. She gave us the fist tip to light a candle then blow it out then light it again which was weird but she said its fun so I guess its "Fun?". Oh and the next tip was to save the ice-cream she said use the candle to find the ice-cream and eat it before it melts because the fridge has no power right?.

I chose this speech because I liked her confidence but it was also very funny! she kept laughing and laughing we all enjoyed the speech so thats why I picked this speech.

Kayaking Narrative

In a lake with a small family going kayaking on a hot sunny bright day. Their names were Jake, Jack and their dad Josh. They jumped in the car and drove off to the lake. It was called Lake Magma and this was a very famous lake.

Once they arrived they took out the kayaks and got ready the family were super excited and couldn’t wait. They jumped in the kayaks and paddled off. Half an hour later they got near a waterfall it was pouring down with water and they were close to zooming down into a rocky lake. Oh No! were about to go down! AHHHHHHHH! As they were falling screams of terror loudly were shouted they hit the water at the bottom of the waterfall. They swam for their lives! their hearts were beating fast like a cheetah they were flowing down the lake and then they all quickly grappled to the side of the grass. They jumped out and were terrified they were breathing heavily.

They changed into their clothes and jumped in the car and went back home. Jack said “WOAH” “THAT WAS AWESOME!” Their own dad was terrified the kids laughed at him “Haha” Dad felt shocked and scared Jack said “At least we had fun”.

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Nesian Fusion Writing

Nesian Fusion

On the 18th of September Nesian Fusion performed at the assembly with some great moves!

One Pacific tee-shirts Ailao sticks, dancing styles and spinning them. Rowana & Mele were spinning their Ailao with concentration. It’s hard to spin the Ailao you need concentration.They never gave up and tried their best, even if they dropped their Ailao sometimes. My favorite part was when they did the under legs while spinning as well.

The first performance was my favorite because the song was cool. It was Beau Monga and when they danced to it was very good and they were demonstrating some great moves, never give up “ No to Fear”  was the message.

Kyron's Curriculum Vitae

We have been learning to write a CV I want to be a fruit monitor because I'm good at handing out the fruit.